I really thought this story was great, but when I read it to my critique group, they were less than enthusiastic. The comments were slightly better but some people missed it entirely. : (
Hiding Disappointment
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I'm the author of two published books under Daisy Jerico: The Love Thief and Sparks Fly, and three published as Dixie Jo Jarchow. I’ve proofread for the Surgeon General’s office, a physics textbook and a terra cotta textbook. My passion is to write and help others write. Write on! And have a normal life with GDP. View more posts
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